Breaking all my heart apart
I can't see you no more
I am here all waiting
Waiting till I die
Reminiscing the times that we had
I can't bear no more
The pain that's inevitable
Wish you were here forever
In my arms like you used to be
Every thought that I think
With every things that I do
You are always here
Implanted in my heart
At times how I wish
You laying by my side
Holding my arms for eternity
Smiling like never before
But now, deep inside I am dying
You have written 'I can't see you no more' in the second line. Isn't there any typo there? The overall message of the poem is nice Keep writing Choki sir..
ReplyDeleteI don't think that is an typo error. Anyways thanks for the reminder and visit.
DeleteSounds like the hurt is still very deep. Healing takes time when our hearts are broken.
ReplyDeleteTina @ Life is Good
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Thanks Tina.
Deletenice poem!
ReplyDeleteI was so pleased to read the poem while seeing your image of the lonely woman.
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteSuch a sad, vivid picture you paint. Brilliant! ♥
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