Friday, May 2, 2014

Distance : Haiku


Two hearts
Distance embedded
Destination apart


8 comments:

  1. Hi Choki!

    This poem is relevant to me right now. My husband, who is my best friend and constant companion, just left for a 15-month work contract in Iraq. I wonder how I'm going to get along without having him around and it breaks my heart. It will be incredible when that embedded distance is overcome and he can return home!

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  3. ah! welcome to the world of haiku :) you might also want to check out "waka" or "tanka" form of poetry. it is almost like haiku but with 5 lines. hoping to see more of your haikus and tankas.

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    1. Thanks for suggesting other form of poem.

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